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5.10.08

Car Crashes and Abercrombie MOdels

Lucy's mind was running with questions....and answers. "is this really happening?"....yes. "he loves me, too?".....yes. "I love him?"....yes. Perfection or rather the absence of it for perfect was the flaw in it of itself. She sat up and pulled Jonas along with her. 

Jonas sat up, Lucy and him hand in hand. Penelope walked in just as they stood up. She saw Lucy and Jonas holding hands and knew. They're friendship doesn't exactly consist if words but rather merely gestures of the fact. Jonas, Lucy...together. The three of them walked out of the room and joined the crowd. The Footballers were kicked out. 

Lucy got them dancing...dancing the night away. Beautiful.

"2am, crufu Cinderella," Penelope smiled at Lucy.
"Ahhhh...do I have to?" She asked with her puppy dog lip. Jonas thought she looked cute.
"Hey! Don't give me that look my parents are already going to beat my ass as it is missy," Penelope came back with.
"Ughers, fine then, I shall leave," Lucy threw her her hand on her forehead dramatically.
Lucy put her hand on Jonas's chest and leaned over to his ear, "I love You" and kissed him on the cheek then moved to his lips and kissed him long and real. Jonas kissed back. Penelope just smiled to her self, "they were together finally", she thought. Lucy held his hand as she kissed. Penelope pulled her away playfully and Lucy slowly let go with the most...beautiful smile wonderfully stretched across her face. 

Penelope was driving home at a stop light. " So, tell me about you and Jonas," she teased.
Lucy was blushing, "Were do I start?" she pondered. She wouldn't be able to tell Penelope what happened.

The football player came bustling next next to them. Major Shit. They rammed they're car into Penelope's, piercing into the flesh of the vehicle. Lucy jolted to the side then swung back, she screamed bloody murder and her head whipped back and forth barely connected to her neck. The car flipped over onto the median. Then......nothing, it was over. Lucy had gashes of glass embedded into her face and her head was leaking blood. Penelope had cuts stretch across her head. She looked at Lucy and tears streamed down her face just as they would Jonas's. Lucy had died and Penelope hadn't. Spiderman has lost his Mary-Jane, Jonas would never be able absorb in Lucy's enchanting glow again, but merely her after mass.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Aww.. that is sad. It's cool though keep writing. I LOVE ITT!!

huh? said...

PENELOPE AND JONAS NEED TO GET TOGETHER IN THIS STORY!

Catherine & the Crazies said...

NO! paige! it would ruin the ending he will always love love lucy!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

awwwwwww...so thats how it happened..wow, so tragic. really, so stealer with those car wreck descriptions. keep going.

it makes me think of something like that happened on a bridge in my hometown. the boys had been high at the time. it was so awful. I was actually going out at the time with one of those guys ..and he really changed ..only for the worst. he got really abusive.

ellie said...

I like how you built it up...hard scene to do. Keep going.

Unknown said...

very cool story. i'm going to follow it.

Anonymous said...

you commented on my blog like ages ago. sorry i didn't get back to you sooner. i've been busy like hell lately. and anyways, i just started reading this blog, i'll be sure to follow along because i freaking love it. :)